Popcorn smoker

visualizing

Popcorn smoker
visualizing

29 Plays

20 Aug 2021

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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3 years ago

Yo @jayjames.1061! Waddup - let's take a look at 'visualizing'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. We suggest working on your improvisating a little to take your track to the next level. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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