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•20 Aug 2021
are ya living a joke life . yup . did ya put ya gloves up force to retire. yup. do ya feel like a chump .. still trying. yup is the light on,But no one home . yup . are ya glad . ya force to be mad. so you can eat another meal . Nope everyone does dope. are you. Nope i rather father a mutant and ninja everything.
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Hi @kamloopswhat! Welcome to our feedback of 'yup'! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The beat is dope and really works for this track. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
are ya living a joke life . yup . did ya put ya gloves up force to retire. yup. do ya feel like a chump .. still trying. yup is the light on,But no one home . yup . are ya glad . ya force to be mad. so you can eat another meal . Nope everyone does dope. are you. Nope i rather father a mutant and ninja everything.
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