Russia Remix holytemple is back
Living in the world where everything was confusion fighting a spiritual battle when nobody understands some don't understand Jacob her hand the way a fight is not to fight is to be lived life and place in the way extensive battle in all this drama spiritual things that do is not to be comprehended what is to comprehend it is a laugh behind the story bone knowing that you are the star child and run away from everything by mistake he lost his home and lost his everything harsh struggled give to America place of hopes and dreams abusions of dreams to complete have been treated as no common as hope by the possibility I was treated like I was garbage a native bloodline horror and Russia who a Owns law enlord owns land I'm out of what I do
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Hi @russiaremix.5967! Welcome to our feedback of 'Russia Remix holytemple is back'! We like the rhyming, it's tight. Good choice of beat! Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. The video quality is fire, keep that up. The good lighting makes for a fire video. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Living in the world where everything was confusion fighting a spiritual battle when nobody understands some don't understand Jacob her hand the way a fight is not to fight is to be lived life and place in the way extensive battle in all this drama spiritual things that do is not to be comprehended what is to comprehend it is a laugh behind the story bone knowing that you are the star child and run away from everything by mistake he lost his home and lost his everything harsh struggled give to America place of hopes and dreams abusions of dreams to complete have been treated as no common as hope by the possibility I was treated like I was garbage a native bloodline horror and Russia who a Owns law enlord owns land I'm out of what I do
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