Love never ends
Augustus Fairchild130 Plays
•18 Aug 2021
I’mma call you when I’m tryna ride You used to come by when we getting high You’ve been on my mind for a little while We trying to make this into a life style Your parents didn’t like me that much But I did everything to keep in touch These days you been away for a little bit But not enough to make me throw a fit Me and the boys went up to the soo Even though you wanted me to stay home with you I’ve been trying to take my mind of you But you keep posting all these nudes Wish I could come over and spend a night But we both know that’ll end in a fight We been apart for several months now It’s kinda making me really think wow
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Hi @augustusfairchild! Welcome to our feedback of 'Love never ends '! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. The beat is fire, nice choice. Nicely done, you can feel the emotion on this track. Great energy, such chill vibes. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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