Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jeremybates.4536! Welcome to our feedback of 'proletariat '! The beat is fire, nice choice. The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jeremy Bates

3 years ago

as youth were taught that the system that governs share our compaction and Morality I assure it does not it no conscience has no need for such Duality as a tool it is Fashioned and controlled buy the Aristocracy to hored resources wealth & Information into a virtual Monopoly as seen fit to be Rationed buy the controlling Faction without Interruption or Confusion expected constant Consumption is Normalcy Collusion & Conformity have proven to cause Authority's Evolution of oppressive Ideologies that cause the people Destatution so the people focus on Priorities spreading feelings of Dissolution among the low classes & Minoritys and begin to systematically dismantle oppressive Institutions distroy the propaganda apparatus so clear becomes Reality or execute the ruling Genealogys but first must overcome Manipulation of elitist Psychology don't buy the Insinuation of poor Inferiority as result of GeneticBioligy & not our Situational Reality Exploitation that the proletariat is always Facing incarcerated if there behavior shows the slitest variant or deveation