I'm alive
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β’17 Aug 2021
yeah I feel like I'm alive drive five overdrive yeah I arrive I'm soft as rice price twice yeah I got singal device. I go to the store I've gotta buy more allttta rice and it's got a high price slice like mice gotta get some more spice more dice so I can get me some more stacks like packs with some more wax. I get to school I start to drool school is so boring I started snoring years on piers I here cheers with some apears.
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Yo @braydenostrander! Waddup - let's take a look at 'I'm alive '! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Good choice of beat! Nice timing, you're mostly on the beat. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Good work
yeah I feel like I'm alive drive five overdrive yeah I arrive I'm soft as rice price twice yeah I got singal device. I go to the store I've gotta buy more allttta rice and it's got a high price slice like mice gotta get some more spice more dice so I can get me some more stacks like packs with some more wax. I get to school I start to drool school is so boring I started snoring years on piers I here cheers with some apears.
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