SICK DAY 🤒
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•16 Aug 2021
(medium rap) ay, its a monday I got school today acting all sick today ay, ay, I got a stomach ach thats what my parents think its time to celebrate ay ay I heard the door close now I am home alone so I just pullout my phone ay ay I got lots of games what about thomas the train but it doesn't entertain yeah yeah I went down stairs to grab some honey buns and play some Fortnite for fun (pause for a second) I am going to facetime my friends but not until school ends ay ay but then I hear the birds start chirping, the squirrels start running, I look out the window to see that the dogs are walking, its a sunny day, people outside are talking, my parents get home and start knocking, nevermind its just amazon delivery, I calm down and realize I need to hurry, time is ticking, parents are coming, work ended my heart is thumping, gotta clean up before my parents come home, and find out im not sick and take away my phone. ay ay I hear the church bells ringing, it is 3 o'clock and my door bell starts dinging, my parents are home and I run to my room, they come inside and I smell my moms perfume, my dad walks in my room all mad and angry, he told me he installed a ring and I acting very strangly, I knew I was in trouble My thoughts started to bubble my dad walked out of the room and told me im grounded, then I pulled out my pillow and began to pound it he left the room slamming the door then I hid under my sheets and counted to four, now I knew he was far and I climbed out my bed, and locked my door. ay, ay
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Hi @dillanfryxell! Welcome to our feedback of 'SICK DAY 🤒'! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. The beat is dope and really works for this track. There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be getting there. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
(medium rap) ay, its a monday I got school today acting all sick today ay, ay, I got a stomach ach thats what my parents think its time to celebrate ay ay I heard the door close now I am home alone so I just pullout my phone ay ay I got lots of games what about thomas the train but it doesn't entertain yeah yeah I went down stairs to grab some honey buns and play some Fortnite for fun (pause for a second) I am going to facetime my friends but not until school ends ay ay but then I hear the birds start chirping, the squirrels start running, I look out the window to see that the dogs are walking, its a sunny day, people outside are talking, my parents get home and start knocking, nevermind its just amazon delivery, I calm down and realize I need to hurry, time is ticking, parents are coming, work ended my heart is thumping, gotta clean up before my parents come home, and find out im not sick and take away my phone. ay ay I hear the church bells ringing, it is 3 o'clock and my door bell starts dinging, my parents are home and I run to my room, they come inside and I smell my moms perfume, my dad walks in my room all mad and angry, he told me he installed a ring and I acting very strangly, I knew I was in trouble My thoughts started to bubble my dad walked out of the room and told me im grounded, then I pulled out my pillow and began to pound it he left the room slamming the door then I hid under my sheets and counted to four, now I knew he was far and I climbed out my bed, and locked my door. ay, ay
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