Astronomical
LCubed1028 Plays
•16 Aug 2021
I'm gonna be an astronaut! I'm gonna have to put up a fight or else I'm not gonna make it through the flight. The speeds reach over 10,000 miles per hour. You already know it's gonna take less than two hours. I'm gonna look at all the stars then the first planet I'm gonna go to is Mars. (music break) next up is Neptune! be careful because it gets pretty cold up there so you might wanna wear some extra underwear. yeah. yeah. yeah yeah. we're about to take flight so sit down, strap in, and hold on tight.
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Hi @lcubed10! Welcome to our feedback of 'Astronomical '! Good choice of beat! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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I'm gonna be an astronaut! I'm gonna have to put up a fight or else I'm not gonna make it through the flight. The speeds reach over 10,000 miles per hour. You already know it's gonna take less than two hours. I'm gonna look at all the stars then the first planet I'm gonna go to is Mars. (music break) next up is Neptune! be careful because it gets pretty cold up there so you might wanna wear some extra underwear. yeah. yeah. yeah yeah. we're about to take flight so sit down, strap in, and hold on tight.
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