Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @richrylan! Welcome to our feedback of '200'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We think your improvising could do with some work, just a little practice and you're there! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Rich Rylan

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.