Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @mumblz! Thanks for sharing 'TakeMeAway (14:20:31)' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

GAVANY

3 years ago

Now you know.(freestyle)