first check
Paora TohuFee Fai Foe Fum, Hear I come, Come !!!!! I pick the mic up Then I start CRIPPEN on. Today I'm with ma cuzzy, Kevlar. better wait, Hes gonna fucken bury ya. My name is Paora!! coming up on the scene Straight CRIP blue C Dabble O.G Dirty dirty south in your mouth bitch. lf your representing any other color??? Fucken CZ Up... U no, cos use all better no... ??? Even Luke Skywalk knows ive got tha fucken flow.. Wide a light saber, Its blue of course. Don't be no hater. Just because your soft. Must be a faker.. I don't give a fuck, you'll meet your maker u dirty fucken slob Bang Bang now you're mother fucken dead
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Hi @paoratohu! Welcome to our feedback of 'first check '! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
CRIP!! CRIP!! BOOM!! BANGING M'CUZ.....
Fee Fai Foe Fum, Hear I come, Come !!!!! I pick the mic up Then I start CRIPPEN on. Today I'm with ma cuzzy, Kevlar. better wait, Hes gonna fucken bury ya. My name is Paora!! coming up on the scene Straight CRIP blue C Dabble O.G Dirty dirty south in your mouth bitch. lf your representing any other color??? Fucken CZ Up... U no, cos use all better no... ??? Even Luke Skywalk knows ive got tha fucken flow.. Wide a light saber, Its blue of course. Don't be no hater. Just because your soft. Must be a faker.. I don't give a fuck, you'll meet your maker u dirty fucken slob Bang Bang now you're mother fucken dead
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