Insane

20 Plays

13 Aug 2021

Some times the choices I make, are such a mistake and only hurt the people around me. The mistakes i made led to dismay, and I lost everyone I thought I loved. By the scars that were made, turned my brain into a blade And then i did things that were insane. Im going insane and theirs so much pain I feel like im being tied to a chain I was leaveing my home, running away, then something in my hands determined my fate Going far from my home to a place thats unknown meeting the people that made me their own I dont know what im doing and im not being tame I think that im fully insane. Im going insane and theirs so much pain and I feel like im being tied to a chain I drift off to sleep, dreaming about my victims, begging for there life, and me cutting them open and watching them die. Im going insane and theirs so much pain and i feel like im being tied to a chain.

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2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Hey @angelholmes.7431! Thanks for sharing 'Insane' with us! Good choice of beat! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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