Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @harmonycollins.1796! Welcome to our feedback of 'Damage (20:55:16)'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Harmony Collins

3 years ago

Someone rap this better for me

Harmony Collins

3 years ago

Look I see your pain being lazy is it every day thing and I know it be crazy because the world can only hate on one thing like DanG I have so many insecurities but everyone comes up to me like hey and I be like go away always bored I barely eat anymore I think that suicide will make it a be a better thang like dang why can’t there be at least one thing to make me happy it’s crazy tho how my best friend knows how to put a smile on my face even if it ends up going away my boyfriend is the best thing this came in my life but I don’t know if he will stay because I’m so lame but I hope you don’t go away and we keep this a better thing I don’t know what I would do if you walked away because I got the suicidal thoughts and he helps me get them away and then they go away