Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @adtec6uaxu! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Firebeats (10:47:52)'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Kaila Gabriel

3 years ago

1 - Two years since I’ve felt your touch. 2 - been a while, I just miss you so much 3 - you’re game so clutch, yeah you’re still my crush, 4 -you’re my crutch yeah, help standddd on my ownnnn 5 - I spray your Versace cologne, on my pillows at home 6 - you’re a real life king, sit on your throne 7 - tall, dark and handsome yeah you’re grown 8 - you’re in the zone, keep working on your dream 9 - let me help you, we’re a team, a little extreme 10 - yeah we scream and fight but a Krispy Kreme is all we need 11 - indeed, to make things better, forgive and believe, and uphold one another 12 - respect your father, love your mother, fearless brother 13 - like I said, you’re the king, Mufasa 14 - a spiritual vibrational source 15 - teach me, run me a course 16 - in your power verse your force