Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @hazxrdous! Waddup - let's take a look at 'return'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Hazxrdous

3 years ago

I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene