Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @danielpain! Welcome to our feedback of 'Shooter (23:30:28)'! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. The beat is fire, nice choice. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Daniel Pain

3 years ago

Freestyle for fun 🤩 #freestyle #fun