Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @rar9lghtd1! Welcome to our feedback of 'I can take em'! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jayden Suesli

3 years ago

I can take em in a fight yuh i can take em in a fight itll feel like its night because i am a black knight i can feel it comin all the way from london they cant see over seas but i can because im an awesome man yuh ay ay I can take em in a fight yuh i can take em in a fight itll feel like its night because i am a black knight i can feel it comin all the way from london they cant see over seas but i can because im an awesome man yuh ay ay trust me they wont feel a thing because i took there fling like a king yuh ay