stan d
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β’08 Aug 2021
i used to love nights now i dread days too guess its not up to me though how to live i might have asked YOU to show me but instead i showed you with a knife to the neck i didnt want to and u2 with the sound you made SILENT like 1 two 3 mississipi bout the river long tho it seemed bit you already know and thats why we dont get along so i had to make a song to yell at you with how i feel therapy in session dont you discount suicide cuz ive tried why dont you ill wait around yeah like that but longer and while hurting yourself still waiting for you to try and understan cuz this still resurfaces day after day and i cant let go no matter what you say its not about what you said its about what you didnt make me feel like loved at all and thats for real still? so carry that around like a happy meal did you cry at all when i was down i wonder still do years later do i even wanna love you at all i know this sounds mean dont get me wrong i dont hate you i just gotta vent so i can find a way to get along let me know when and if you can i could be your biggest fan your Stan so dont make me try again signed Dave YEAH DID I SPELL THAT RIGHT i gave you what it seems at the time we both wanted but then you came thru little late though or at least i think it was YOU no way to tell? is there guess its why i fuckin hate YOU
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Hey @davidkaufman.1115! Thanks for sharing 'stan d' with us! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Cool different style #manormachine π
i used to love nights now i dread days too guess its not up to me though how to live i might have asked YOU to show me but instead i showed you with a knife to the neck i didnt want to and u2 with the sound you made SILENT like 1 two 3 mississipi bout the river long tho it seemed bit you already know and thats why we dont get along so i had to make a song to yell at you with how i feel therapy in session dont you discount suicide cuz ive tried why dont you ill wait around yeah like that but longer and while hurting yourself still waiting for you to try and understan cuz this still resurfaces day after day and i cant let go no matter what you say its not about what you said its about what you didnt make me feel like loved at all and thats for real still? so carry that around like a happy meal did you cry at all when i was down i wonder still do years later do i even wanna love you at all i know this sounds mean dont get me wrong i dont hate you i just gotta vent so i can find a way to get along let me know when and if you can i could be your biggest fan your Stan so dont make me try again signed Dave YEAH DID I SPELL THAT RIGHT i gave you what it seems at the time we both wanted but then you came thru little late though or at least i think it was YOU no way to tell? is there guess its why i fuckin hate YOU
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