Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @joseruiz.1649! Welcome to our feedback of 'at the park'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jose Ruiz

3 years ago

I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene