Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @darrenwalters.4397! Welcome to our feedback of 'Pick Up The Pen (21:12)'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Darren Walters

3 years ago

Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.