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pleas follows
8 years ago
U have a nice flow bro. But u should try and pronounce every word and rhyme clearer. Also work on writing a bit more. Keep practicing ur writing and it will get better. U were also monotone and I think it's cuz u were reading from ur paper. U gotta get your verse down pact or at least be more familiar with it before u spit it so that u can spit with conviction and energy. Your delivery and passion is everything in rap. If u sound monotone, niggas will get bored and turn ur song off no matter what u r spitting about.
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