I'm Sorry
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•07 Aug 2021
I'm sorry it shouldn't have happened to you plz forgive in trying to be a better person but our break up has left my heart broken up to pieces I tried to be the best but I knew I won't happen since Ur sister broke up with my best friend at that moment I knew it won't work I so sorry I loved you so much I've been think about the times we had we've been talking everday every now and then but this shit was tragic we had to break up I sorry I hope u could find another man this has made me think about my relationship with you it took a toll on me I've been trying to make everything work since we fought that day I'm so sorry it all came to a end
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @lilkruger721! Thanks for sharing 'I'm Sorry ' with us! Good choice of beat! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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