Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @nathanielsmiley! Welcome to our feedback of 'Money 💰🤑 on mine'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Nathaniel Smiley

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.