Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @brendanbarrett! Welcome to our feedback of 'demo 3'! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. We can feel the emotion in this. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Try improving your recording quality if you can. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Brendawg

3 years ago

yeah yeah yeah where do i start look my lady left me and left me so empty now im sitting back lauging because i cant cry no more got no tears left cried at grandads funeral then my granmothers godbless them both they were my everything and now thats fucking gone my relationship with my dad is abit shipwrecked let me spit this at the moment insanity is what you call it spent 3 weeks in a mental asylum felt like a prisoner in my own fucking head felt like my head was caving in don't know how long i have left let me just let you hear this for a quick set i don't mean to be the dopest or the sickest just getting those feelings out you know when your stuck so low when you cant think no more my ex thinks im crazy but i think shes right i praise the lord i make it out alive so use to the streets its made me what I've become we all gotta eat somewhat i gotta rise to the top to get my mum the house upon the hills my mums health aint doing so good she might be due for surgery but im not Gunna let that get me down..... yeah yeah anybody going through deppression you can get through this