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rich now

rich now

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06 Aug 2021

Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down

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3 years ago

Hi @skepford1756! Welcome to our feedback of 'rich now'! Good choice of beat! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down

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