Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @hiddenleaf! Waddup - let's take a look at 'pain'! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Good choice of beat! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Carter

3 years ago

why so angry why so mad why do you get so dang sad all you crying all your pain makes you think out of your brain yeah what's your definition of success I dont trust my thoughts that come in my head thing that beats in my chest is broken because of pain I think I dont think I deserve pain ayy smile for a moment I can't not again this pain I'm push away these people that hate my I feel weak because this pain ayy