Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @arielringler! Waddup - let's take a look at 'star of the show'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. We think your improvising could do with some work, just a little practice and you're there! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Ariel Ringler

3 years ago

I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene