Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jay7.6825! Welcome to our feedback of 'butterfly'! Good choice of beat! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jay 7

3 years ago

I'm not a Ninja but I sneaky got a gang but they creaky you know I'm not going to Stop you know I'm going to the top you know the gangs gonna Die you know I'm gonna fly. fly so high in the sky like a butterfly now die