Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @killasoundincbeatzkillasoundinc! Welcome to our feedback of 'dirt'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. We like the rhyming, it's tight. Good choice of beat! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

killasoundincbeatz killasoundinc

3 years ago

And I got a lot of work That's my word puttin in work I'm a slave to the beat And I love makin money cause I got that work But I'm still in the dirt And you know how it goes And I'm still in the hood how you feel in the vert Dirt bag I flip bag then I kick Flip like I'm on A skateboard I ryhme all the time so I dont get bored And I fight like I carry a sword crazy with a sword mark that word That's word to where all that work go find me that pair to trade I ain't gotta play no games I'm just telling you it's time for change Just sippin it like it ain't gon' change I'm like a drive by today If you wanna play games Let me know if I got any brains B***h I got the drop on your head It don't take any hurt How can things work up under any pain on the curb next to the dirt I've been hurting way too long too long in that dirt So don't be so concerned I know I got better dirt It's all about the benjis Puttin in work till my knees hurt You know I got better things So you know I gotta put in work