Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @lisabailey! Welcome to our feedback of 'pick up the pen'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your recording quality if you can. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Lisa Bailey

3 years ago

Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.