Lorenzo Garcia
Lorenzo Garcia

I Want It all

I Want It all

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31 Jul 2021

hip hop is not dead it was buried alive it still lives underground and im coming for my crown i ant gonna entertain you clowns Im getting higher than the clouds im the thunderclouds that's brings the crowds yes im brown a piss off Mexican that no longer understands people and how they act and switch up .love me or hate me I promise it won't make or break me im staying awake can't trust these snake's no I don't need a break fuck drake im a nobody this my first diss song and my demon chosen you im unbeatable not reachable everything I say is believable this ant teachable hope you know your career was only seasonal im hungry too for fame whats wrong do you get mad when people say your name im just taking my aim my life is lame demon inside don't make me afraid there no more feelings inside do you even rap before you were handicap now your running laps all over maps im just saying I can make better music than you I got passion too look at my actions got to many distraction beauty is always attraction I wonder if I even get your reaction can't fuck with me im to much to handle this is just a sample I know its sandal that I got make a example out of you life a gamble now scramble

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2 years ago

Yo @dreamer01559, It's time for us to take a look at 'I Want It all'! 💥 The vocals aren't coming out clear, test different mic positions and try to keep the distance between you and the mic consistent. There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying. This track needs a bit of work. We can hear your passion for rap and we like the energy. However, the recording quality has really let you down. If you can work on this and ensure your vocals are crisp we know your tracks will live up to their potential! This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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