Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @dpbyzcf2tk! Thanks for sharing 'Bass Head (09:28:41)' with us! Good choice of beat! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

bleeplett

3 years ago

Losing my rhymes that were flowing out sublime Somehow missing parts that precisely defined Who now holds the power. Power That's the question of the later hour We don't have time to search and locate Nott gonna open it ,concealed rivers of hate It’s not all that Flowing underneath the surface Corrupting their intents and doing it on purpose A swirling lot of everything We put into the world Sometime don't realise what we sing Creates a space for all those things A meta physical reaction Sets the Scene with all that passion don’t have to wait til he says ' 'action Or he' gets no satisfaction That's not how it goes you know We all have power to explode Our words and thoughts create your world A story That's so un-evolved