just bsn

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31 Jul 2021

I'm on another level, They gotta play catch up, I'm never gonna settle, Right now I got next up, I got my eyes on the prize, Meteoric rise, Record breaking highs, Limit is the skies, Word to the wise, Before you even try, This is just a taste, I'm about to shine, Light so bright, That it might leave you blind, Aspiration so great, That it can't be denied, So lend me your ears, And check out my rhyme, You've been blessed by the best, Thanks for your time

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3 years ago

Hi @dtown5strg! Welcome to our feedback of 'just bsn'! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Try improving your recording quality if you can. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! Good choice of beat! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

I'm on another level, They gotta play catch up, I'm never gonna settle, Right now I got next up, I got my eyes on the prize, Meteoric rise, Record breaking highs, Limit is the skies, Word to the wise, Before you even try, This is just a taste, I'm about to shine, Light so bright, That it might leave you blind, Aspiration so great, That it can't be denied, So lend me your ears, And check out my rhyme, You've been blessed by the best, Thanks for your time

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