stage star
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•28 Jul 2021
I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene
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Yo @lucidoofiesforlife! Waddup - let's take a look at 'stage star'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. Practise improvising a little to improve your sound! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Work on your rhyme scheme a little bit in the flow and I feel like you would definitely do a lot better you’re not too bad my brother keep working on you stop bye
I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene
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