Story Telling (11:28)
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•28 Jul 2021
It’s the fire hissing and popi I’m the heat tough to beat the the top blazed off she just watches me and I’ll be The villain killin spilled my liquids through this origin pretty well known as far as the Name I go by life’s a circle ride with fear to drive tha mind to lying on diein insisting that a different detentions keeps a hold of you’re thoughts fought on suspicions with selfie images are on suspention fought on top of the so called real I’ll push them down when they come back Dont
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Hi @jtksavage! Welcome to our feedback of 'Story Telling (11:28)'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Great energy, such chill vibes. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
It’s the fire hissing and popi I’m the heat tough to beat the the top blazed off she just watches me and I’ll be The villain killin spilled my liquids through this origin pretty well known as far as the Name I go by life’s a circle ride with fear to drive tha mind to lying on diein insisting that a different detentions keeps a hold of you’re thoughts fought on suspicions with selfie images are on suspention fought on top of the so called real I’ll push them down when they come back Dont
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