xyz

18 Plays

28 Jul 2021

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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3 years ago

Hi @iidarktingzii! Welcome to our feedback of 'xyz'! Good choice of beat! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Practise improvising a little to improve your sound! Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

Nice flow I definitelyLove your rhythm you came in with some nice bars great delivery and very good craftsmanship I know that these are written but you really should drop some of your own I hope to hear some good bars and I hope to see the same love towards my music as well

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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