Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @elijahisbest123! Welcome to our feedback of 'hood life '! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Eliiscool

3 years ago

living in the hood got me scarred (PTSD) made it out the hood in my brand new car when I was 2 I was selling in the back yard came a long way now I'm getting far to take my pain away gotta go to a bar and now that I'm so far I be making these bars