Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @joshuachilds! Welcome to our feedback of 'rich🤑'! Good choice of beat! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

joshua childs

3 years ago

Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down