shilton12
shilton12

come and join me

come and join me

13 Plays

22 Jul 2021

I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene

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3 years ago

Hi @shilton12! Welcome to our feedback of 'come and join me'! Great energy, such chill vibes. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene

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