1st draft
Gabriel Maldonado55 Plays
•21 Jul 2021
look i get it, pandemic. mask on mask off, life lesson. no lie tis the sesson. 2 cry 4 for no reason social butterfly its in the air, keep breathing. what is you thinking? mask on, or the world vows you committing treason. now is happening. understand. a world of fashion, government planned? nacho mask off, breathe. stick it to the man. hes protecting a nun from a dangerous clan. they seize expensive recreational clothing. hazmat suits only. las vegas fear and loathing. because of you and i. U.S officials heads officially blowing. t virus only gone for the moment. millitary deployment. the ship is in the ointment. they hope we don't exploit it. or read too much into it. learn some thruth and have the whole world rejoicing. revolutionary, kinda scary. soo many possibilities they stay apparent. facts. we stay getting attacked i swear the shit is wack who brought us our meal cause we didn't order bat. my tummy feeling fat. i guess im just fed up. trying not too say too much. too much keep the heads of the feds up.
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Yo @gabrielmaldonado.8364! Waddup - let's take a look at '1st draft'! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Try improving your recording quality if you can. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Good choice of beat! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
look i get it, pandemic. mask on mask off, life lesson. no lie tis the sesson. 2 cry 4 for no reason social butterfly its in the air, keep breathing. what is you thinking? mask on, or the world vows you committing treason. now is happening. understand. a world of fashion, government planned? nacho mask off, breathe. stick it to the man. hes protecting a nun from a dangerous clan. they seize expensive recreational clothing. hazmat suits only. las vegas fear and loathing. because of you and i. U.S officials heads officially blowing. t virus only gone for the moment. millitary deployment. the ship is in the ointment. they hope we don't exploit it. or read too much into it. learn some thruth and have the whole world rejoicing. revolutionary, kinda scary. soo many possibilities they stay apparent. facts. we stay getting attacked i swear the shit is wack who brought us our meal cause we didn't order bat. my tummy feeling fat. i guess im just fed up. trying not too say too much. too much keep the heads of the feds up.
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