Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @swhitefolk! Thanks for sharing 'I love the most' with us! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your recording quality if you can. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Swhite Folk

3 years ago

Why is everything I love the most So wrong for me? And everything I’m holding close, is so far away from me They don’t want me to lie, but they don’t wanna hear the truth It never made sense to me Why everything I love the most is so wrong for me When I first met you I was so broke And I tried to hide behind The memphis streets Praying that you didn't know About my problems 'Cause I couldn't bear to see you go And when you found out All that happened Your little heart was broke And I had to earn it back And I learned in fact That money don't fix that shit Not tattoos and "I love you"s It's trust that I had to get I'm sorry that I ever hurt you for anything that I did Can I put this ring on your finger, let you know that I'm serious? Marry me no I must be Jim Morrison to get a motherfucking girl like you Don't know what I did in my past life But it must have been something cool 'Cause I'm a whiskey-drinkin', fight-provoking, cigarette-smoking dude I got a problem with my attitude It's hard for me to keep cool But when I look at you, I see me A reflection of a real soul So pardon me if I may seem Loose and out of control It ain't the drink talkin' It's me talking Fuck if everyone knows You my girl and that's that So hop on the back of this bike and roll Let's roll now I never let someone straight up disrespect you I never let someone call you out your name I'll always be the one that runs up to protect you 'Cause I know if I was down you'd come and do the same So, let's pack it up and move our life to Nashville Build a studio in the house and do our thing And I'll take you out and we'll go honky-tonkin' Get drunk and fall in Tennessee love Tennessee love Fall in Tennessee love Fall in Tennessee love Fall in Tennessee love Can't you see that my hands are shaking? Withdrawals from meth Ain't no use in us faking But it's our life. Ain't it, baby? So ain't no use in us taking A chance with it So, I promise that I'll work on my patience Someday if we get lucky and we grow and get old We'll look back and laugh about the circus and the show But for now we live it up, we spend it up and we go To the last call in every roomin this town Turn the lights off hold me now You and me now I never let someone straight up disrespect you I never let someone call you out your name I'll always be the one that runs up to protect you 'Cause I know if I was down you'd come and do the same