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Mula 💰
Yo @dotapearson! Waddup - let's take a look at 'first rap '! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
all i want to do is make a rap that doesn't sound like crap i want to go harder than any other rap i dont want to stay snd wait for this bitch to snap back because It makes the poor want to move back to the trap because they walk like they ain't got everything in there back all i need is a mic and a crowd to react like the crack that makes a brother whant to snap back wishing that they wasn't sad thinking about everything that they could of had looking back at life like damn thats what i vould of had like maybe my life wasn't that bad why was i sitting in my room getting in my moods all i did was sit alone wishing to go home talking to my dog playing with a bone talking on the phone to my bro playing on my PS fo with my fam thing adout a band with one hand doing a stand with the man with a plan and his name was stan on a one night stand with a girl named pam at a place named slam the ham when they pull out a stand on a band with a solo man that has a bam and a wham with a slam on a slow dam with a slat on a bat and a crack with a rat a tat tat and a splat a splat splat on a nat a nat nat with a rat a rat rat and a quack a quack quack when you think i done rhyming you are not timing the climbing of the pace it takes to get where im at writing i am tired of the thinking it takes to get to where i and im spacing out not thing about the time or day in any way
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