Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @larryduncan! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Life'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Larry Duncan

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.