Datravesty

thanks for ur time freestyle

Datravesty
thanks for ur time freestyle

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18 Jul 2021

thanks for ur time They gotta play catch up, I'm never gonna settle, Right now I got next up, I got my eyes on the prize, Meteoric rise, Record breaking highs, Limit is the skies, Word to the wise, Before you even try, This is just a taste, I'm about to shine, Light so bright, That it might leave you blind, Aspiration so great, That it can't be denied, So lend me your ears, And check out my rhyme, You've been blessed by the best, Thanks for your time

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3 years ago

Hey @anthonycasteel! Thanks for sharing 'thanks for ur time freestyle ' with us! The beat is fire, nice choice. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Try improving your recording quality if you can. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

thanks for ur time They gotta play catch up, I'm never gonna settle, Right now I got next up, I got my eyes on the prize, Meteoric rise, Record breaking highs, Limit is the skies, Word to the wise, Before you even try, This is just a taste, I'm about to shine, Light so bright, That it might leave you blind, Aspiration so great, That it can't be denied, So lend me your ears, And check out my rhyme, You've been blessed by the best, Thanks for your time

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