Derek Hartley

3 years ago

thanks I'll keep working on it.

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @derekhartley! Welcome to our feedback of 'd rock '! Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Dope recording, nicely done. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Derek Hartley

3 years ago

Look, I’m Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down im on another level, They gotta play catch up, I'm never gonna settle, Right now I got next up, I got my eyes on the prize, Meteoric rise, Record breaking highs, Limit is the skies, Word to the wise, Before you even try, This is just a taste, I'm about to shine, Light so bright, That it might leave you blind, Aspiration so great, That it can't be denied, So lend me your ears, And check out my rhyme, You've been blessed by the best, Thanks for your time