Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @dereklewis! Waddup - let's take a look at 'vsap freestyle '! Good choice of beat! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Derek Lewis

3 years ago

I got a tech aim at his neck body gone drop boom bow that's another op nigga a snitch he really a bitch fucked on his hoe ye made dhet bitch suk my dick I got a glock aim at his top body gone flop body gone drop call up lil zay he ready to spray left yo ass dead wit dhet extended clip 30k she make it clap she sat in my lap like we in fortnite bitch u a one tap I say u is a one tap u ain't hit no lik bitch u is a cap