Mind
30 Plays
•17 Jul 2021
I got a war going on in my head bang bang that's the sound of the shots I try to fight back but then they attack I get drug down to a state i can not take but I still stand back up for them to try to conceal my fate but I'm strong and I won't take the bait I go through all these stages like storybook pages I get almost to the the treaty to end the war that is tearing up my core the final stage won't be easy believe me I have been there multiple times to try to fight for my mind I grap the pen and paper and then write the line.
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Hey @12bit! Thanks for sharing 'Mind' with us! Good choice of beat! Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
I got a war going on in my head bang bang that's the sound of the shots I try to fight back but then they attack I get drug down to a state i can not take but I still stand back up for them to try to conceal my fate but I'm strong and I won't take the bait I go through all these stages like storybook pages I get almost to the the treaty to end the war that is tearing up my core the final stage won't be easy believe me I have been there multiple times to try to fight for my mind I grap the pen and paper and then write the line.
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