Natavion Jackson

Make It Happen (15:58)

Natavion Jackson
Make It Happen (15:58)

15 Plays

16 Jul 2021

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.

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3 years ago

Hi @natavionjackson! Welcome to our feedback of 'Make It Happen (15:58)'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your voice is sounding a bit loud in the mix, you may wanna put it down a little. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.

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