Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @marquisthomas.5356! Welcome to our feedback of 'Marquis'! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practise improvising a little to improve your sound! The beat is fire, good choice. Your timing is great, well done. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Marquis Thomas

3 years ago

I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene