Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @itzbrii! Welcome to our feedback of 'SHE MY HOE'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

REDNECK-B REE

3 years ago

im a garden and she my ho sticks flowers in her butthole feed her peanut butter and bacon makes her belly rolls start shaking carpet burn on her knee caps she do nothing thats why she fat got boobies but they fake tho loves movies and spaghettios and thats why she my hoe she my hoe she my hoe